Comments

Practice Task 1 Comments:

"Well done for getting everything onto your blog. The magazine works and there is a clear connection between your research and your final piece. Your sell lines are generally sound, but the ones near the masthead could be arranged a little more carefully. Do remember that the brief asked for two covers. When it comes to the examined coursework be sure to stick doggedly to the brief."

Practice Task 2 Comments:

"You have a really good range of photos here Lewis. I'm not 100% certain which ones you took yourself, but they demonstrate really good attention to detail and especially good use of lighting and mise en scene. Really focus on bringing this eye for detail and mise en scene to the images you use in your music magazine. You have the potential to achieve an A grade in this element of the course."